11/30/2009 04:20:16

This is a nice profile you have here. Add me as your friend buddy.

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03/26/2009 15:09:57

You guys have the idea, keep workin' and it'll come.  I like some of the auto tune but you guys have good voices.  Try using the auto tune a little less. 

Keep 'em comin' 

 

03/05/2009 19:12:16

It sounds good you guys did a great job. One bit of advice I can give you though for your next songs, is to focus a little bit more on a more unified theme. It seems like there were alot of different ideas with different themes in the new song. It was a little hard to determine the message you were trying to send out, none the less, the flow of the words and the beat of the music sound great! Congrats.

02/10/2009 18:15:05

 Great quality on the sound and vocals, but if you want the song for commercial use , to get it on the radio, you might want to distort the curse words or replace them. The flow of the lyrics and the beat also sound good, but you might want to change the chorus a little it kinda repeats itself too much. Maybe you could try adding something Like,  {Welcome to the Carter......flowing non-stop harder, Got this rap game locked down like molten boulders. (repeat x 2)} {Welcome to the carter..... bringing you the illest revolution of this rap business, whoever got it come and bring it. (repeat x 2)}

 Another idea is you could add an intro representing your names, label, or studio to cut the gaps before the chorus.

Besides that it sounds good. Let me know if this helps. Take care.